thirty-sixth Moon Prize for the April 19, 2019 full moon goes to Dianne Moritz's
breath-taking story "The Last Good-Bye."
THE LAST GOOD-BYE
You scrape together enough money to fly out to San
Francisco for a brief visit before his Marine unit ships out to Vietnam.
He drives you down the coast to see the sights: Big Sur,
Carmel, Monterey, Steinbeck country.
On Highway 1, he's chugging beers. Your hands shake and
stomach flips. You're sure he's going to veer off the tight shoulder, slip over
the cliffs, and plunge you to your death in the churning surf below.
That night he wants to catch some topless acts on Broadway. The surly bouncers refuse to let you in.
"I'll be your girlie show," you promise.
He books a room, but, before you head inside, he hauls you
across the street, buys a gallon jug of cheap, red Gallo.
Once in the moldy room you want to wash up, so you trek to the community, urine-soaked bathroom
down the hall.
Back, behind closed doors, his sobs sear your heart, as
fear flames in your belly. "Don't cry," you whisper, then throw
yourself into his trained-killer arms. Sex is rough and quick and you say: "Talk to me! Please talk to me!"
He's moaning now, tears staining his handsome cheeks, and
words shoot out like bullets: dirty gooks, jungles, landmines, leeches, rats as
big as dogs, returning home in a body bag.
You fall to the floor, helpless,
confused. After all, he's the one who quit school, signed up, left you.
Next morning, farewells are cool. As the airport walkway
pulls you away, you turn around once to wave good-bye, only to watch his strong shoulders retreat into the
Once home, you join protest
groups, march to the capitol building with new friends. Sometime later you
write a "Dear John" letter you wish you'd never sent.
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"The Last Good-Bye" was first published in Fewer Than 500 Words (Feb. 26, 2019).